[原创]吉恩赞歌/诗史/军歌/国歌(不知如何定义)
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把弥尔顿的失乐园改了下,不知道到底怎么定位。。。中文版大概有什么不和谐的词。。一直提示要审核。。先发英文版的。。。
原文是严格遵守五步抑扬格的。。。可惜我能力有限。。无法完全达标。。有达人能继续加工的再好不过
OF Man's First Disobedience, and the FruitOf that long lasting war, whose mortal taste
Brought Death into the World, and all our woe。
With loss of Zion, till one greater Man
Restore us, and regain the blissful State。
Blow angerly the horn,that on the battlefields
Of Abh, or of the Kang three, didst inspire
That Moses, who first lead the glorious country,
In the Beginning how the Zion and Abh
Raise out of Peace: Or if the Spacenoid
pray for victory more. By the Side 3 that floated
Fast by the Orbit of Space; We thence
Invoke thy aid to the buried Epic,
That with no middle flight intends to soar
Above the Universe, while it pursues
Honors unattempted yet in Battle nor War.